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--应用了较多的语法和词汇;
--语法结构和词汇有些许错误,但为尽量使用复杂结构和较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言应用能力;
--有效的使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。试比较下面两篇习作 I got up very early this morning. I went to visit a farm with my classmates. We walked to the farm. The workers welcomed us at the gate and we went to many places. They were very beautiful. And then we had a picnic lunch.We were dancing and singing in the party. Finally we said goodbye to the farmers there. I got up very early this morning because I would pay a visit to a farm with my classmates . After about twenty minutes’ walk, we arrived at the farm, where some workers gave us a warm welcome. Then they showed us around the farm so that we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and the harvest there. A
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